First Draft Feedback

In order to gain a good understanding and perspective, all of the groups in our year gave feedback to one another, to try and suggest idea's for each others film opening. From this feedback, we were able to improve and change a variety of things within our film opening, in order to make it better and improve it. We ensured that the shots of people going round the houses were made shorter. We also ensured that the beginning intro wasn't as sudden. Also, we ensured that the clips were made clearer and the sound fitted better than the draft. We also made the sound at the start of the film sound more natural. We added Foley and used the original sound. This started to make the film seem a bit more natural. We have also changed the positioning of some of the titles to make them flow better. At the moment the titles we have are quite plain and aren't very creative. we picked this up in our feedback and are going to try and change this for our next edit.

We found the feedback to be really useful because we get to find out what people think the weak points of our movie opening are. This helped use improve our film massively because people also came up with solutions to the problems which was really helpful.